The dog sprang into action and splashed as much as he could, the shark paid attention to the dog and swam and chop the dog instead of the kids.The kids ran to the shore and pack and home to mother and told their mother all about it. Their mother was devastated to find out what happen and reported to the police the beach was closed.In about 2 days the story was up on the news,internet and paper.The kids were sad with out there dog, but they were glad that they could live to see another day.
This is a true story that happen march 2 2003 |
Great writing Phoenix. I like the way you have added more detail to make the story interesting for the reader. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteWell done Phoenix this well descried and in very good detail, it must of been a day with Poppa KEEP IT UP PHOENIX
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